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8/1/01: Thanks to Ann McAfee's skill for extracting persistent nits from tight places, the following corrections:
Page 4, in the next to the last paragraph which begins "Science fiction fantasist Piers Anthony's magical land . . .": In the
2nd line, it reads "Florida—is no is no more. . . ." One of the "is no"s should be deleted.
Page 6, in the next to last paragraph which begins "So let's illustrate the games . . .": In the 3rd line, it reads "Gore was
the Democratic candidates." Should be candidate."
Page 6, the first bullet under the SIMPLIFIED TABLE, which gives definitions: "Crossover voting . . . needs a close quotation
mark to make it "Crossover voting."
Page 20, check the table header (These guys are related to these guys) to make sure that the arrows are in the upper cell.
Page 23, the next to the last paragraph which begins, "But wait! There's more! . . ."
Insert the word "at" into the second line to make it "by looking at precincts within counties."
Page 25, the last paragraph beginning with "Perhaps the most ironic
part of this tale . . .": on the 4th line, it should be the "New York Times." The s was left off. the Times.
Page 30, in the first paragraph, the 4th line which reads "We chose those counties that were within 5 percent of the
reported." To this, add "values of the vote" to make it "We chose those counties that were within 5 percent of the reported values of the vote."
Page 30, first paragraph, in the sentence beginning "Looking at the remaining ten counties . . . ," add "ratio to
"presidential/senatorial" to make it "presidential/senatorial ratio."
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